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BtLS and LS
Hi and
good afternoon to you all! This is going to be a Behind the Scenes special
about my two recently-posted Shorts, entitled Before the Lightning Strikes and
its follow up, Last Resort. Long story made short, both of these were
challenges given by Giselle Elaine, who usually gives me challenges to
accomplish whenever I want to accomplish something. How vague. Last
night, I asked for challenge, and these two were the result of it.
Basically,
she asked me to write a prequel to The Shoujo Parallels: Eri. I decided that
the events would occur after The Shoujo Parallels: Oddette. So with everything
in the middle, I eventually decided to show what was going on in Arzen’s case,
and even Eri’s. I thought that it would be good to see them portrayed in a
positive light (especially Eri) since they were portrayed as villains in the
first prequel (TSP: Celeste) and hardly appeared in the second (TSP: Oddette).
Readers would wonder of course, what her story would be like, and Giselle gave
me the chance to elaborate on that through writing, well, prequels.
The
read more button is there if you’re interested.
Arzen
was portrayed as the main antagonist in the first two prequels, as well as Eri
in the first. However, Eri hadn’t much appeared in the second prequel, where
she was only mentioned here and there. In the upcoming third prequel, The
Shoujo Parallels: Eri, people would hopefully see where she was coming from.
With not-so-pleasant opinions of her thrown here and there, it would probably
be nice to see what really is going on with her over in the Mortal Realm and in
her parallel world, Technika.
In the
prequel Before the Lightning Strikes (Lightning referring both to Arzen
and Eri and Strikes referring to the actual prequel), two classmates of Arzen
coax Arzen into telling them what went down with their group. Obviously, she
was bothered by it and only spared a few details, then forced a smile and told
them that it would probably be better as time would pass. A suspicious Beatrice
Amor then takes Arzen away and asks her what happened – to which she replies
that they merely wanted to see her wallet.
A bit
later, Beatrice notices that Arzen has been ‘blanking out’. The other lies that
it was because of the lack of sleep, but Beatrice sees through it and claims
that Arzen had been able to get a proper night’s rest. Arzen then says, “It
must be Freshman year”. Obviously, Beatrice understand what this means.
Finally, the bell rings and they go out to Therese.
It all
seems normal until the actual lunch. Here, Beatrice hangs out with Elaine’s
group, leaving Arzen and Therese stuck in another table by themselves. Therese
notices Arzen’s lack of appetite and starts worrying, to which the other dismisses
and eats again (only slightly).
A time
skip occurs. Arzen is seen in her club, and an upperclassman asks her if she
would become an officer in the next year. She replies a ‘no’, wanting to stay
and get used to club duties. The older student then asks her to recruit new
members, to which Arzen agrees to do. Later, it is mentioned that Arzen doesn’t
like Fridays for a reason – the walk alone.
It is
then shown that Arzen doesn’t like being in her own thoughts for some time. The
real reason for this is that ever since the group’s fight occurred, she had
been stuck in a pit, unable to get out, that pit full of her own thoughts that
haunt her as the days pass. To avoid this, she finds comfort with the company
of Beatrice and Therese. But every Friday as she walks alone, she finds herself
more and more disturbed by those thoughts – and tries to clear them away.
The
scene shifts to Technika. Enter Eri, who tells Cissa to start curfew. As the
other leaves, Eri can only think to herself and watch as the sky darkens. A
feeling in her gut tells her that things wouldn’t be as pleasant in the nearing
days. As she then starts patrolling around, Mona Lisa finally catches up to
her, and both of them search for Cissa and aim to return back to their
headquarters.
Eri is slightly
irritated and wonders if ‘she’ is in as much trouble as she herself is.
This
doesn’t refer to Cissa or Mona Lisa.
This
refers to her human counterpart – Arzen Venura.
Back in
the Mortal Realm, Arzen is shown eating with her mother and brother. Her mother
makes a comment that she saw Megan’s dad and asks if there has been something
going on. Arzen gives the same reply that she gave her classmates – that things
would be better in time. Later, lightning strikes – a sign of the nearing of
the third prequel.
Much
later, in her room, Arzen’s folder falls. Papers spill out. As she gathers and
reorganizes them, the sight of a few letters make her stop.
She may
have reread them.
But in
the end, they just end up where they should – in her desk, shut out until
another time. The short ends with the signatures of the ones who sent the
letters – Elaine Rivers, Gabrielle Angeles, Megan Alando, and Maxine Ride.
Now, we
move to the follow-up. This was more emotionally draining.
Beatrice
and Therese don’t fail to notice a worn out Arzen. Finally, Therese asks
Beatrice to do one favour: to try and make amends. Beatrice refuses, telling
Therese that she had tried days before, with Arzen, and resulted in a negative
outlash. But Therese tells her to try again. As furious as she is, she knows
that Beatrice and Arzen herself want the whole thing to go back to normal. As she
leaves, Beatrice is left with the sleeping Arzen, and she swears to at least
try for her friend’s sake.
Therese
is bothered with Beatrice’s lack of will to try, and is purely convinced that
something is wrong with her friend Arzen. She tells herself that if Beatrice
fails, then she herself might have to step in, as much as she doesn’t like it.
Back to
Technika, with Eri sleeping in her own compound, Cissa and Mona Lisa take
notice of the other’s faltering moods and strung-up attitude towards defending
Technika. A hesitant Mona Lisa asks Cissa if there was still a chance to bring ‘them’
back, and the maroon-eyed woman replies coldly, asking her not to ask that to
Eri, in fear of driving her up the wall even more.
In the
Mortal Realm, Beatrice and Arzen are left in their classroom. Beatrice glances
at Arzen’s notebook and asks her friend if she would want a pencil, to which
Arzen declines. Later, when she leaves, Arzen is stuck between relief and fear
once more.
The end
is a passage from what she’s writing, hinting that she might not be able to
take more of it if the Freshman year ends with all of her friends (and previous
friends) still in ‘war’.
Another
symbolism bit~
That pen would probably
crack under the pressure, making the ink spill out and coat her hand. Her
uniform would most likely become a mess, but she knew that the smaller girl
would worry more over the notebook instead and the writings that would turn
incoherent and unreadable.
The pen
symbolises Arzen possibly falling apart under the pressure – the ongoing fight.
The ink is her emotional stability. If the uniform were to represent the
trivial things in her life, then the notebook itself would represent her life
as a whole – blurring and becoming unreadable, eventually leading to her
falling apart as a person. The writings would represent her current life being
written down word by word, event by event.
So what
happens if she breaks and loses herself?
Whew.
Well,
this was emotionally draining for a reason. Haha. Well, this is the end to this
Behind the Scenes post! God knows what would actually happens during the third
prequel, but what the hell. This is all according to /my/ own interpretation,
so it may not even have an effect in the third prequel. *evil grin here*
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